Sucked Back

I'm trying to get back into this. This was a thought I had the other night.

Cloud creeps in on sleek, timid feline feet

Curls within the soft crutch of my mind

Threatens suffocation in the idle hours

The Dead beats on in the Blood

Reviews

[Ed Hart]

yes, the dead beats on in the blood...i can see the clouds creeping on feline feet, but not the timidity...restrained ferocity maybe, but not timidity