Shudder

Shudder

A Chapter by Brooke Wake
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A reflection.

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Sleeping last night, I dreamed of you
Alive
But confined, sick and restive
In the wooden slats of a knothole-riddled, tar-framed box,
Dripping with the neglect of several weeks of blind remorse.

The belying squalid sweet of the small pink needle
Had not pierced your blood.

We still had time.  

All I had to do was lead you through the door, 
Maybe move us a few states down.

But when I woke,
I knew the silent, gelid killer had taken full affect.
Your mane still lies beyond piles of decaying leaves, 
Swirled in a mass of memories, cradling your proud neck.
Apprehension of tears raises the hollows of my eyes like
Irreplaceable bridges that forever threaten to fall.

I close my eyes and cradle the air
Envisioning your soft, sooty neck curved around me 
In incurable acceptance,
Sturdy, quiet, dark frame,
Carrying me without reserve

All those heart-and-flesh years...


© 2011 Brooke Wake


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I have a horse like that....

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the flow and structure of this expression.. had my attention captivated through out.. good write..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nothing compares to that bond nor the loss of it. Such a heart felt and honest display of emotions, beautifully carried out.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i cannot imagine a more heartful declaration of love and grief

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Brooke Wake
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