Temporary Fix Of Disembodied Fervor

I like verbose titles sometimes.

Some days sting

Swollen with miserly conceit

Pressures of an open range shot

Decisive and sure

Rain a metallic shroud

Shrapnel fine as angel hair

Bleed mercury onto satin mind

Pool in unctuous beads to soothe

Placebo palindrome

Marking the end

Of hopeful half -life

Author's Note

Paul caused me to whip this up quickly...I'm hoping to not be enslaved by the occupational iron rods that impale my mental liberation from time to time. Spontaneity begets beauty, and so I intend to open up this chakra a little more often.

Reviews

[Emily B]

oh, yes . . . wondrous words

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. paul, full marks to you for being a charismatic catalyst ... brooke ... oh my goodness ... all those uniquely divine expressions and then placebo palindrome ... jesus!!! ... you're not a poet ... you're god's gift to mankind ... this is sheer brilliance ... a rocket write ... absolute genius ... dare you deny us your words ...