Raw Sound

Girl like meta.

Raw bank cuts an interlude 

Reeds stripped of all sound

Dustless and stunned

Alone with the water.

Not a swirl of wind spatters the sand

Not a shriek of a gull sears cold, bleached, sky stretch

A moment of still

Nobody sees it.

Words in the nothing.  

Reviews

[Ed Hart]

someone saw it, and now many of us

[paul]

wow. this is great !! such unique imagery

[...]

. oh, brilliant! ...

words in the nothing
and nothing echoes
blisters of sound
and nothing bursts
as i wait and watch
watch and wait
for a sign
a signal
a note
a voice
and wonder
if it's all in the mind
or all in the hearing

. you inspire ... so much ... as always ...