bare eyes

something I pulled out of thin air about five minutes ago.. I like how it flows. :-)

Sometimes I feel like the weight of the world is on my shoulders, and no matter how hard I try,
I'm never going to win
The front seat
Of my car feels the beat
Of my legs when I cry,
I can't imagine how many times
Tears have fallen
In this spot,
Looking for a way to relinquish my anger to the night
I just have to keep going
I guess

Reviews

[Matt DeFranco]

Casey, as young as you are and writing with such conviction and poise. You have a unique style and a gift. Keep it up!

[Rock]

"I cant imagine how many times
tears have fallen
in this spot"... that's pretty cool
Keep writing Casey, I'll keep reading

[Casey Wakeford]

Again, thank you all so much!! It makes me so happy.

[Saddam]

well...well...to havy and loaded poetry. but that's great to have weight in poetry words. love this, awsome. loveya.

[Chaze Casillas]

I think this is great! It does flow really well! :)

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Yes keep going:) You sound as if all has came down on you:( But get it out this is a great way:)

[Casey Wakeford]

It totally is! I believe I've just had a boring night and a long week... It sure does help to release it though!

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I'm so sorry I am with you in all so don't feel left out. Yes it does . I am taking a break for a few days. Get some me time in:)

[Casey Wakeford]

I have a long weekend coming up so perhaps I'll relax some! Glad to hear you are too!

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Yes get some me time in:) Write take a walk smile listen to some music laugh sing take pictures, What ever you do just see the beauty:)