chain

I feel like this recently.

Every time I turn around,

I see my reflection in the mirror.

I look wrecked.

I look sad,

and I look chained

with a golden chain

a hard golden chain,

which won't come off.

 

As I look at the bird,

so free and so happy,

all I feel is envy.

Reviews

[Abhishekizy]

Hello cutybeast333,

I have gone through all your writes and i can see there is a story in you awaiting to be told. Now there are two types of writers. One who is seasoned, perfect, can write ten writes a day with hundreds of fascinating imagery. the other writers belong to the society, who just writes....maybe last night they wept, a glimpse of ex-BG/GF, a rememberance of a long gone soul.... anything happens and they just strike it down. They aren't too wary of the lyrics, rhymes and the flow. They just write.

You have to believe in which category you belong and what category you would like to belong!! The write is good, clear in its soul. Its small and simple. I don't worry about the grammer cuz comeon, we aren't linguists, we are mere writers. Shakespeare broke grammer too. But i would also like to see a more complicated thoughts from you.... when you look deep in you, the images are never crystal clear. Its as faint as a light throguh a ground glas, its very very mysterious. Bring those in your write. No matter how small or big a write it, it should hold the attention nevertheless. Welcome to the community.