first kiss

It was cold inside and everyone was around. People were skating on the ice there were siwshs and screaming,music waas in every dercation.Blasting and people were singing. I was talking to my friend and there was a accrourd  siltence.She asked if i woudlike to be kised by him today. It was our first time beng out on a date, I wasnt that good at these kinds of things know; and probably ever because there isnt that much for me. So she said hold on and went to talk to him. Then there he cames with me just sitting there and nothing better to do because it was the best thing to do. I cant skate and im not good at anything.

So he came over and told me that it was an early gift.Then with his lips wet i got kissed on the lips. It was amazign for my first .like he had alot of practice and I just sucked at it even after the first date. i never liked getting kissed again even after we broke up about five months today. (I belive) I dont know. Well i ahvent though abut doing anything like that ever agian. 

Reviews

[Jessi Webb =)]

If this is true then it is very romantic but quite sad, If not it is still those things but in fairytale kind of way . I have not been lucky enough to have my first kiss but...Well anyways good write !

[Steven]

its good but you have a few spelling errors, i liked it is it true?