existence

see a tear going down her face cause she just heard that

her lover just got in a car wreck

she can't breathe or move  her whole life is gone 

in a blink of a eye

but she remembers the good time's

her life was surounded around him 

 now she has to start new with her life

so see the tear of existence going down her face.

 

 

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

This was beautifully tragic, I have know people that have gotten those calls. It's such a traumatic moment and the power of it is so strong, it takes years to get one's heart back in a semblance of normal.
And there are always tears.
Good Powerful emotion comming through.
Great Write!

[Sujash I. Purna]

very touchy and poignant! kudos!

[Veronica]

Wow. You've got some great works! Keep up the good work, I really like this one. :]

[Riley]

Woah babe. This is beautiful. Its heartbreaking, But its beautiful. You are a great writer.

[-Adam-]

Heartbreaking! The title in this is the best thing. When it is used in the poem its powerful. I lost a good friend in a horrible accident involving 8 of my close friends. "Like Kin" on my profile is the tribute I wrote for him. You might enjoy it?