She Wolf

Topaz colored eyes

With a crystal clearness

Almond shaped saucers

With a pinch of mysteriousness

An elegant, graceful body

Dusty grey colored skin

A fierce kind of beauty

She can die for her kin

A warrior in disguise

She's awake at midnight

Canine teeth for swords

She's ready to stand up and fight

She races on the snow

Everyone fears her growl

She disappears with the mist

And her midnight howl

Author's Note

Inspired by the song 'She Wolf' by David Guetta.

Reviews

[King Wolfe (Dylan A. Ki..]

Great poem, has a slight lyrical aspect which makes this poem have a nice flower, I love your diction, just. Suggestion, in your 12th line the word up isn't exactly necessary, so I think the removal of that would give it a better flow, also in your 8th line, unless there is a meaning I am oblivious to, I would use the word would in place of can, overall nice solid work, if this is something you like to write about hope to see you in next months contest

[Sid]

An interesting story this poem tells us, there is great imagery in your poem...keep up the good work!!

[Mia]

This is a lovely write :) you used descriptions well and I like the way you embodied strength and beauty in your descriptions!

[Coyote Poetry]

Photo gave life to the poem. The wolf is a animal of mystery. Can survive anywhere and know how to live with man. I enjoyed your tale. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Shubham's View]

Well brilliant description of the wolf I must say!
Good write! keep it up!

[Belle]

You have my heart for this as I am fascinated with this beautiful creature.
You powerfully describe her, perfect for the Moon to which I am watching over my window right now.

[Aehr]

so it's night in your corner of the world? lol. It's 5:00 pm here in India.
And yes, thank you so much!

[Belle]

Yes it is and we are having wonderful sight from above.
Good afternoon there dear. I really love this piece.
Thanks you for sharing.

[Aehr]

:)

[Jazique]

Whoa wasnt that amazing, i mean ive nver heard someone use so many direct and indirect characterizations to describe the night cteature wold. well done indeed it had great dedcrptions, wonderful flow as every line line and word rolls of the tongue and without the pic i could still see this proud and majestic creature. bravo ! Brava!(clapping in the background)

[Abbie]

amazing poem! grea job really getting into the mindset of a wolf and describing her. Its just fantastic and very well written. Nice job! :)

[The Fallen]

Amazing poem, I love Wolf poems, books, and stories. This was a amazing poem! I could totally see the wolf in my mind. Loved it (: and I love the song lol

[Zainab UF]

Wow, good job, Rhea! I loved the feeling of strength the poem projects. "Canine teeth of swords" was a nice touch.