Writing comedy

Writing comedy

A Poem by Eric
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Honesty - hard core - pushing boundaries... while still being open to learning, listening and growing ... that's how you go somewhere.

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The poetic point.

Push it. Go past the easy joke, under the pinky in the stinky joke around the cuming in your sock shock joke and grab the extreme dream junky joke

with your hands choke and your baby skulls broke you gotta just keep wandering finding threads and following them till you get stuck here

with a queer in the alley behind your tolerance where beer bribes fear for a five dollar hand job

you’ll hate yourself in the morning but let’s face it you weren’t exactly enamored in the afternoon.

© 2014 Eric


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Good one author.. First part is significantly good..

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Eric
Eric

Seattle, WA



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Interpreter for sign language - mental health therapist I've written a novel but it needs something and I'm not sure what... hoping to get feedback to make it swoosh. more..

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