My Dollar

I found a dollar today.

It was just lying there

on the cold

wet ground.

I picked it up

and kept it.

Author's Note

Just something lighter than my regular work. I wanted to tell the world about how I found a dollar the other day so I wrote this. :D

Reviews

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Very simply written statement about yourself..One who is conservative..Sunflower.

[SimplyDisastrous]

lol, i just got a read request from someone to read this. again. so, i read it again, and, i agree with andrew: This is EPIC

[Gianna Perry]

Excellence. Pure excellence.

[Andrew Wright]

This is the most epic poem EVER. I'm a fan already.

[Adelia Alighieri]

hahaha this made me laugh - typical human behavior written so elegantly. Great work done.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The dollar needed purpose and in this day and age every dollar counts.

[LSS]

Wonderful. Short and sweet. Telling the message in brief. I like this lighter side of you. To me most of my stories reflect the humor I see around me, whereas much of my poetry expresses my darker moods better. Keep up looking up, and find that lighter vein again.
LSS

[Manda]

plan and simple is always nice. i liked it. good job.

[TTBoy28]

Simple...yet, you still took me on a journey!

[Laura]

It sounds really cute, in an innocent way. It's short, sweet, and to the point. It made me smile. Nice job on this one, I thought it was great.