This is a sad poem, but is nice to read. I have been there, done that, and still am going through it. I haven't talked to the person that has hurt me. I have not said a single word to him. I can't have another friend like that again. I hate when people act like he does. I have friends that I truly care about and I will try not to make any new ones. This also reminded me of the poem I wrote, but mine is a little different. Thanks for sharing. :)
This is a sad poem, but is nice to read. I have been there, done that, and still am going through it. I haven't talked to the person that has hurt me. I have not said a single word to him. I can't have another friend like that again. I hate when people act like he does. I have friends that I truly care about and I will try not to make any new ones. This also reminded me of the poem I wrote, but mine is a little different. Thanks for sharing. :)
I have never seen a poem structured the way you did with yours, but I think it's great. The repetition makes the agony or conflict he or she is going through seem endless (nice way of making it past, present, and future by the way). I clearly see how this person has been affected by a love gone wrong. Great Job.
I can feel your emotion in this piece, and I love how you repeat yourself from stanza to stanza, it really captivates me as I read it. I think it flows really well, and you capture the sad and depressing emotions perfectly through it.
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