All Because of you

It's hard to think of trust

because I let you in before

...and sat there...

   ...broken

      ...torn apart

all because of you.

 

It's hard to think of friendship

because I know what is coming

...I sit here...

   ...breaking

      ...tearing apart

all because of you.

 

It's hard to think of love

because my heart will twist

...I will sit there...

   ...and break

      ...and tear apart

all because of you.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is a sad poem, but is nice to read. I have been there, done that, and still am going through it. I haven't talked to the person that has hurt me. I have not said a single word to him. I can't have another friend like that again. I hate when people act like he does. I have friends that I truly care about and I will try not to make any new ones. This also reminded me of the poem I wrote, but mine is a little different. Thanks for sharing. :)

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Nice sad poem Sam

[TTBoy28]

This ditty is a great recipe! I really like it!

[Jonathan]

Love it. I can relate...

[indu]

past, present and future affecting trust, friendship n luv.. good composition/pattern..keep writing :)

[Kandy]

I have never seen a poem structured the way you did with yours, but I think it's great. The repetition makes the agony or conflict he or she is going through seem endless (nice way of making it past, present, and future by the way). I clearly see how this person has been affected by a love gone wrong. Great Job.

[Kenneth W. Barber]

I like the repetition in each stanza. It drives home the fact that we continually replay our mistakes in relationships. Good job here.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

It is indeed very difficult to regain trust once it is broken..but time does heal..well written..

[Brit Riot]

I can feel your emotion in this piece, and I love how you repeat yourself from stanza to stanza, it really captivates me as I read it. I think it flows really well, and you capture the sad and depressing emotions perfectly through it.

[J.Black]

LOL! This reminds me of the Ne-Yo song "All because of you!"

Aside from that little moment, I think this is really well written. You leave broken sentences, the same emotion in this piece.