All Because of you

It's hard to think of trust

because I let you in before

...and sat there...

   ...broken

      ...torn apart

all because of you.

 

It's hard to think of friendship

because I know what is coming

...I sit here...

   ...breaking

      ...tearing apart

all because of you.

 

It's hard to think of love

because my heart will twist

...I will sit there...

   ...and break

      ...and tear apart

all because of you.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is a sad poem, but is nice to read. I have been there, done that, and still am going through it. I haven't talked to the person that has hurt me. I have not said a single word to him. I can't have another friend like that again. I hate when people act like he does. I have friends that I truly care about and I will try not to make any new ones. This also reminded me of the poem I wrote, but mine is a little different. Thanks for sharing. :)

[~Lizzy♬]

This is such a sad poem, but it's so beautiful. I feel the pain that the speaker is talking about. I think this poem was a fantastically written piece of writing that has many meanings into it. Wonderful write!

~Lizzy~

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I love this, simple yet sad and filled of feelings, i love how you wrote this with the structure, the dot dot dots, really created the feeling even more.

[Talia Renee]

This poem is beautiful & captures that pain amazingly. Wonderful!

[BlackStar]

Awhh :( I know what you mean. You literally wrote what I have been wondering for a few days! I can't believe I've never come across this before today! well done :) I'd love to hear it as a song or soundtrack someday, I'm sure it would be a lovely song!

[GlamGirl]

I love this! I like the format of the stanzas.
Great write!

[charlotte talley]

deep and to the point. this I can relate to. I once had a s/o and I felt the same way. your heart is broken to pieces and you seem not to be able to grab the pieces together again. great write.

[clauds294]

Amazing words. nuf said

[Jersey]

The first thing I notice was how you used the repition of certain lines but changed them to be ever so slightly different. I really like the piece as a whole, it's short but emotional and easy to relate to.

[Anna Kay]

aww,this is a very sad poem but i love it,because im going through the same thing.it hurts alot when u let someone in u think u can trust but no you cant. its hurts and u feel your pain. very great wright:)

[PaperHearts]

Aww, this is a somewhat heartbreaking write. I really liked the structure of this piece, and the way you repeated particular words and phrases. The emotions came across really strongly, and I think that that was helped out a lot through your choice of wording, and the tone that you created through that. I could certainly relate to this piece, and I know that many other people will be able to as well. Great write,
~PaperHearts