I found me

Laying here dreaming
staring at the ceiling
wasting the day away.
The world's flying by
out the window outside
but that's just really okay.
Contemplating, scheming
Thinking life's beaming
around me, giving me the
satisfaction I need
to think about life
and where I'm going.
Dreaming
Scheming.
My life is going somewhere
I don't really know where
Sometimes I just lose my way
I'm too scared to move on
and I don't stray away.
But then I wanna see
that Italian tower leaning
and maybe I could leave right now.
But if it's too far,
I could jump into my car
and take a little trip downtown.
Thinking bout my life
and where I'm really going,
I know who I am right now.
Like a caterpillar cooning
A butterfly blooming
No more assuming anymore.
With a cross in my heart
and Jesus in my soul
I know who I am
and where I wanna go.
With trust hanging by
and friends clinging near
I've become me.
And I know who that is.

Reviews

[TadKent]

Love this. So raw and real. Give me more. = ]

[P.S I Love You]

When im in my own little world, I feel the same way. I Love This poem very much, Especially beacuse i can relate to it well. :) GREAT POEM!

[Vartul]

You are an Accomplished writer,and i thought that you were just a pretty-faced maiden.Love this poem.

[Livana Lowell]

Sounds a lot like me. I have yet to find who am entirely, but I'm close I promise.

Anyways, I like the poem because I can relate and I really felt the joy and light you thrust into this poem.

I like it. Very well written.

[lamia]

nice poem , well written

[Antonio Valentino]

Samee, some people go their whole life (me included) not truly knowing who they are. It's a curse I tell you. I envy what you have, hold on to that tight, and never forget, who you are, and where you came from. It comes in handy when you look in to a mirror.

This had a total rap like rythym to it. Each line had its own begining and end. Put a beat to this, and its on.

Fantastic!
Antonio

[Darruesh Eetraydes]

Hmmm I've sat back and contemplated where I'm headed like in this poem. Everyone can relate to this piece, and its very uplifting. Great job :)

[Jeff Bresee]

Sounds like the makings of a pretty catchy song.

[Frantzuu]

Awesome poem, very well written :D

[John Stussy]

Brava. This was well done. Always good to know where you're headed, a sense of direction can go a long way.