A broken heart inside my name

S tuck inside my head

A nd I can never trust again

M ad and hurt, I hate you so

A ppealing yes, but you are no friend

N ever will I forgive or forget

A ll you did was lie and lie

T o make me feel for you and yet

H ell is where you must belong

A s pain is all you brought to me

 

J ust because we had a thing

A nd all you did was talk to me

N othings changed I hate you now

E mbrace these words, oh can't you see!

 

V andalizing my heart like that

A nd making me trust you closely

N o turning back to you I see

O ver you now, you just need to leave

T o another place I wish you weren't

T rust is not an issue now

E verything has gone all wrong

R eap upon these words of sorrow

L ust into my eyes and see that

O gres appeal to me more than you

O bstinate words have gone away

 

Its' over now and you have no room

To make your way

back into my heart

For you disceived me so

and broke my heart....

and just to think

after all you said

and made me feel,

You're the one

who always said

"Everything will be alright."

Who would have thought

you'd break that light....

Author's Note

Enjoy. These feelings really did come out of my name!

Reviews

[Samee's twin sis- Shand..]

Touching....and practically amazing. This has to be one of your best poems yet. I can feel your pain inside of your name and I can feel it for you. I knew there was something wrong. I could feel it. Feel better for me okay. No guy is worth that pain. You have basketball and your friends. Who needs to think about a jerk who doesn't even live close to you. If someone decided they don't want you, it's their loss sweetie. Theirs not yours. You're the best! Keep writing! I can't wait to read more. I love ya!

[MagiCrystal]

Good Job.. those are your letters and your name.. Love it hands down.. Bravo

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

lovely sweetie....you blow the boys away....they just think youre cute and dont know how to treat a girl! stick with your gf's they come thru when men run out...excellent write! much enjoyed.x0x0x0

[GYPSYLEAH]

How very creative and unique -
Keep the great attitude too

[Alexis]

very creative i haven't read a poem like this
for a while, and each line flows perfectly with
the others great job:)

[Dianah]

Really clever. Shows that these feelings really come from the heart. Even though the reader can tell there is hurt and pain in this. Glad of the humour too.
'O gres appeal to me more than you'
keep up the good work.

[B A S S E M A S H R A F]

amazing job you are so talented to do such a trick

i tried too much to mack it,....but i couldn't

good luck :D:D