How did it come down to this?

How did it come down to this?

A Poem by SamBug

How did it come down to this?
My heart so full of lust
yet so full of hate.
 
How did it come down to this?
My life in order,
yet still falling apart.
 
 
You took me
and you broke me.
I hate you
yet I love you.
 
 
How did it come down to this?
For me to feel like this,
yet feel nothing at all.

© 2010 SamBug


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SamBug
This is one of my best.

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The emotion in this poem is so powerful it could bring a room full of people to tears. I really must agree with you, this is one your best. You are an excellent writer and if this poem is any example you have a great passion for it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautiful and sad. U did a great job at expressing your emotions here. I really liked it :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


If this describes you actual feelings, I'm really sorry. This is an amazing poem, I cried. You have a real passion for writing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree, it's really well done. Your emotions in this piece not only show, but burn. Another good poem by the great writer Samee.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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