How did it come down to this?

How did it come down to this?

My heart so full of lust

yet so full of hate.

 

How did it come down to this?

My life in order,

yet still falling apart.

 

 

You took me

and you broke me.

I hate you

yet I love you.

 

 

How did it come down to this?

For me to feel like this,

yet feel nothing at all.

Author's Note

This is one of my best.

Reviews

[Talia Renee]

I love the whole love/hate thing and conflicting feelings.

[The Cute 1]

boy can i relate 2 this thumps up

[Jasi Rae]

I really liked this. It's straight forward and strong. A lot of people can relate to this, I know I can. Great write. :]

[PyroKitty24]

Very nice. It was easy to read and emotional. Everyone feels like this at some point in their lives.

[Bailey C. Writing]

I agree with you. Very good poem. I've felt like this before and could relate well, and feel your pain.

[Lily Mae]

The ying and yang of emotion.. you penned these feelings well..xx

[Jazique]

Awwe wonderful job. Its like mixed feelings. Its the whole love and hate scenoreo in short simple and sweet form. Well done in writing this giving it a little change to the regular love and just poem. So excellent job and thanks for all the comments you've given me and you totally deserve this one in simple terms it was "nice."

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the twist to this poem.
"You took me
and you broke me.
I hate you
yet I love you."
Love can make us crazy. We need someone and want to escape in the same second. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Julie Beth]

I really like this you did an awesome job :)

[brenda]

love it ican really reklate to this!:)