Level of Love

 

Level of Love

 

Though of you enter my mind

The beauty of the earth is not hard to find

When I looked into your eyes

I spire my soul until it explored

Into the point of no return

As I read your soul and learn

My own thoughts of divine self

How your words are good for my health

Do I touch your soul in that way?

You touch my mind, heart, body and essence

Can you ride the wave of emotion to the shore of life?

Can I ride your voice to the deeps of your being?

To the space of the obsess

To the point when I get no rest

Because you flow into my mind every time I open my eyes

I give thanks to the one above for everything that he has given

And taken from me

Even the pain cause it helps me

to grow and expand to another level of love.

Reviews

[Lady V]

With love comes growth and defeat. We are defeated and no longer control what we throught we could. Its out of our hands yet we try hard to keep control only to lose it in the end. We also grow and mature from the experiences we receive while in love.

Great piece. It was a pleasure to read.

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

[sheerpoetry]

I realy like this one. " Even the pain cause it helps grow and expand to annother level of love" thats my favorite line. its very thought provoking.

[Farrah Grahm]

"Can you ride the wave of emotion to the shore of life?
Can I ride your voice to the deeps of your being?"

Beautiful I like this because its a new concept. There are many levels of love, and when you can get to the point where you realize that, then it's real.
Great job.