infinite

I'm not sure, actually.

we were creatures of whimsy

dancing beneath the stars

the world passed us by

our minds alight with the sun

we were entwined

our universe bright and small

shining as a distant star

on the horizon

we lived alone

but never lonely

together in sentience

constantly yearning for the other

we reached for each other

i for you and you for me

and when our fingertips met

we became infinite

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

It is a bit confusing in my untrained eye, I used to write like this...It comes in a rush and sounds so good when you put it down. It clearly needs work...In the first verse for instance...Dancing..alight with the sun...yet DEAD to the world...I think this has to be changed...I am NO expert...and I am only trying to help...