Diamond in the rough

Tells the memories of a refugee's homeland and of her hopes of a new future in the U.K.

Every morning Amena awakens from that harrowing familiar dream she dreads. Although this dream was once a nightmare reality for Amena. In which she replays scenes of dead men, women and children killed from mass shootings in her native city of Raqua. It was as a result of these shootings Amena's family decided they had no choice but to folow what others had done before them and flee to Europe. For them it was the only opportunity out of this living hell.Now living safely in the U.K Amena hopes of a successful life despite of her past. Therefore, when Amena awakens from this oh so familiar dream. Amena tells herself a new life and a new beginning for Mama's Diamond in the rough.

Author's Note

My first short story looking for tips and critique be a brutal as you like I appreciate all feedback

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good short story. Made me wish to know more. You create hard life and new hope. You could expand with the who, what, where, why and how of this tale. Make a interesting story. Thank you for sharing the excellent story.
Coyote

[S.F.Wilson]

Thank you and appreciate your advice

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[abderrahmane dakir]

Thank you for reminding us for the refugees that search the peace. Thank you so much.

[Savon Wingo]

Its short really good and to the point. For your first short story you've done very good. Keep on writing cause I know you'll get better than before great job!

[Chris]

Perhaps would serve better as a synopsis or outline for a larger story?

[S.F.Wilson]

To be continued Chris :)