Strikes & Scope

Hit me, rend my flesh
Tearing my being into two
Clear your silly eyes
Shed no tears
Feel your superiority
Create my fears
Anxiety grows, in my mind
Stay or leave me behind
Close your thoughts now
Focus on my voice
Here my love

Reviews

[Ariana Omnomnom]

I like your poetry. It's really filled with feeling.
I wish my brain was working today so I could give better reviews, but unfortunately it is not. /:

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i could feel this in my bones.. allowing those powerful volatile emotions to tear us in half as we stand in the middle waiting for the verdict.

[Brittany Zedalis]

You have a way with short poetry. I quite like it.

[JacobMarloe]

Thank you again. Would that I could focus and express how I feel about your work, it is so deserving of praise.

[Brittany Zedalis]

I'm flattered to say the least. I was unaware that anyone liked my words that much.