To Be

To Be

A Poem by JacobMarloe

We move
Walks of life
Where we go
We chose

To be alone
Not me
To be together
Maybe
To be one
Absolutely

We talk
Waking loving thoughts
Wondering wanting clarity
We need

To be loved
Not free
To be accepted
Truly
To be me
Only

© 2016 JacobMarloe


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613
This is so great. Shines true to what most of us want.

- Brittney

Posted 9 Years Ago


JacobMarloe

9 Years Ago

Thanks very much
613

9 Years Ago

You're very welcome!
I love this. I don't really have anything else to say because it would probably just be me saying that I love this over and over again.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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the quest to define a purpose and a life mode. to be one with the one that wakes up in us the words that have been sleeping or running for too long. to feel them accept us for who we are.. a good reason to be.

Posted 9 Years Ago


JacobMarloe

9 Years Ago

A wonderful duet. Thank you.
Is it weird that I'm reviewing so fast? Oh well.

I love how it feels like a question/answer kind of thing in that second stanza. I could be completely wrong but that's what it seemed like.

I love short stuff, and this is great as a whole.

Posted 9 Years Ago


JacobMarloe

9 Years Ago

Thanks, your certainly correct and an awfully quick study.
Brittany Zedalis

9 Years Ago

Hahaha, I'm pretty much doing nothing but lurking on here right now, so I saw this pop up in my feed.. read more

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Added on April 13, 2015
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