A Scentless Flower

I leaped beyond the distant heaven just to catch a star,

But I caught a beautiful yet scentless flower.

As I look closer to this flower,

A sudden feeling of sadness.

Had just embraced me with emptiness,

And remember you all of a sudden.

Your beauty that reflects the eternity,

I'm longing for you and wishing to be with you,

But we can't see each other,

As we were forbidden by our distance.

Reviews

[DanaRegen]

Nice poem I really enjoyed it, I liked your word choice and the way you put the poem together it sounded great, thanks for sharing.
-Dana :)