Dreaming of an Angel Forever

 

Dreaming of an Angel forever

 

An angel descended on front of me,

Lovely face that caught by my eyes.

It was like that I have been blessed,

And was given a chance to be glad.

Nothing like this happened to me before,

An angel that become my inspiration.

Rage inside me had disappeared,

Outlasting all my insanities because of her.

Seems to be that she changed my life,

Eternity has unfolded over her wings.

Nevertheless I have fallen for her eyes,

And now I had fallen to the eternity.

Though it’s hard to believe,

I know that she’s the right one.

Vanishing through the light,

I was caught in the depths of the night.

Dreaming of her forever in my slumber,

An eternal feeling that I won’t let go,

Dream that suddenly became reality.

Reviews

[fallendemonofmercy]

wow....just wow. i loved that you incorperated these lovely, faeiry like dreams and willed them into reality - who would want to leave behind something so magnificent?
but there is one comment....all there is to say is that some of the past tenses may have gotten misused at times.
amazing read - i look forward to reading more from you.