A poets love letter

About my first and probably only real love.

She was as sweet

as that first bite

of chocolate ice cream

as a child.

I loved her.

When I kissed her

I felt my insides

melt to the ground

like those dark drips

falling from my pretzel cone,

saturating the earth

with subliminal

satires I now

can reach with 

not just pshycality

but with words.

Reviews

[Angad Waraich]

A very well done piece of poetry.
Really enjoyed how you compared love to simple life experiences.
Thank you for sharing such wonderful poetry.

[Lyn Anderson]

This is a wonderful poem. The richness and depth of imagery transport the reader into the writer's world effortlessly.
One note -- I wonder what you meant by pshycality? physicality perhaps?

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

This write is completely wonderful. I love the way you penned this with all the metaphors and images as few but powerful as they were. Greatly penned.

[thewholesoul]

excellent piece. loved the metaphors especially the opener. best wishes

[Christopher Staab]

Thank you very much.