A doughnut world

Love doughnuts but their bad for you.

The world I know aint filled with creme.

There aint anything good inside there,

just the tough dough

of an addiction filled world

where tasty treats

come before everything.

They even have their own signs

at street corners

selling the best product,

but you don't always find 

the Krispy Kreme.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Interesting analogy here. I have received your friend request and am pondering upon it. I have become overly cautious as of late -- I love to give new writers a chance (I was new not so long ago)

[Christopher Staab]

Ok, no worries, just liked your writing. Looking to expand my audience any way I can but who am I fooling. I am a lousy writer, lol, a street walker, a info-maniac, lol, You won't add me now. Just kidding. Thanks for the read and comments.

[thewholesoul]

'the world i know aint filled with creme. there aint anything good inside there, just the tough dough" great opening amigo. much enjoyed.