The Beginning

Theodin Renduit had been a respected General in Lord Skylark's army for many years. But after much contemplation, he decided to retire and start a family. With Lord Skylark's blessing and a substantial retirement gift, Theodin and his wife Necrona would set out for the town of Taer Nardin. Theodin was no ordinary man. Everyone was gathering around to say their goodbyes as Theodin loaded the last of their belongings into their wagon.
     “I can enchant your wagon and teleport the two of you instantly into Taer Nardin. It would be a piece of cake,” offered Merle the mage.
     “I know it would, but I will decline Merle. Last time you teleported me from my house to the General Assembly, I was in the shower and arrived in nothing but soap. After that long embarrassing walk home, I’ll pass. Thank you just the same, besides, we want to see the country” replied Theodin.
    “Perhaps you can teleport there to see us any time you want,” said Necrona as she patted Merle on the back.
     “Perhaps it is for the best,” said Merle as he wiped a tear from his eye. “Oh, before I forget. I have a present for you.” He reached deep into one of his pouches and fumbled around with the contents a few minutes. “Ahhh, here it is!” he exclaimed as he drew out an amulet made from a large crystal and a silver bell cap.  “It is called the Crystal of the Guardian. It will help keep your family safe.”
     “Thank you my friend,” said Theodin as he took the amulet. “We will treasure it always,” Theodin fastened the amulet around Necrona’s neck.
     “It is beautiful. Thanks for the wonderful gift Merle,” said Necrona gazing deeply into the crystal for a moment before allowing it to plunge beneath the folds of her traveling cloak. Theodin helped his wife onto the wagon and quickly rounded the wagon to get to the driver’s seat.
     “Farewell friends!” said Theodin with a wave. With the flick of his wrist, the horses started moving forward, pulling the loaded wagon towards its new home. Many of the townsfolk lined the streets to wave farewell to their war hero. Theodin smiled when he saw many of his friends and neighbors waving their goodbyes and well wishes for their journey. As the wagon passed through the main gate, Theodin found his path flanked by the battalion he last commanded. Every one saluting as he passed by. He knew that he would miss them all, but he was determined to start the next stage of his life.

As they traveled through the forest, Theodin couldn't help but feel a sense of excitement mixed with a little bit of trepidation. He was an Elven warrior, after all, and he had faced many battles in his lifetime. But being on his own, without the structure and discipline of the army, was new territory. Necrona, on the other hand, was excited about the adventure they were embarking on. She was a liberated dark elf with a voluptuous figure that turned heads wherever she went. She loved to explore new places and meet new people. It was one of the things that Theodin loved most about her.

As they drove their wagon towards the town, Theodin and Necrona felt a sense of excitement and anticipation. They had heard many stories about Taer Nardin, a place of great beauty, wonder, and magic where the people were friendly and welcoming. When they finally arrived, the townsfolk greeted them with cheers and songs. The streets were filled with music and dancing, and the air was filled with the fragrance of flowers and sweet pastries. Theodin and Necrona were stunned by the warmth of the welcome, and they soon found themselves swept up in the joyous celebration. They danced and laughed, and for a moment, they forgot about all the dangers they had faced in their past lives.

They settled into a nice cottage near a crystal clear lake flanked by emerald trees. This was going to be the perfect place to start their family.

Reviews

[csprohar]

Still expanding the text if I can manage to find the time.

[Alteng]

The title of this story intrigues me, since my main interest has been goblins for awhile.

This piece seems to be a rough sketch, and you seem to borrow names for the purpose of your characters. I have done that often as well.

I find it curious that Necrona wants anything to do with daylight hours, being a dark elf and all. You might want to describe her clothing for this journey, because I would think she would be fond of either wearing a cloak or a large hat to shield herself from the light.

I did find it amusing that the teleportation spell didn't work as planned. I might have to do some nasty things to my teleporters.

There are many things I could say about this piece, but I really feel you need to expand upon it.

[csprohar]

Not ready sure what you meant by borrowing names. It is just a start.

[Barbara Tennyson]

So is it Skylark or Skylock? You use both.
“Perhaps it is for the best.” said Merle --Don't use a period immediately before the closing quotation marks if what was said is to be followed by who said it.