LIVE

Live as today your breath expires 

 

But learn to maintain an everlasting fire 

The fire will galvanize people, tribes to create stories 

& share them to others. 

Leave this earth gracefully as yourself 

Guide those by your own trials & errors. 

 

 

Your knowledge and courage won't be forgotten and lying with the dust

Reviews

[Ruth]

Fantastic...whatever our trials and errors or blessings and happiness, we owe it to ourselves and humanity to set an example - care and give love, treat others as we would like to be treated ourselves so we leave this plain with a good heart and compassion... loved this x

[unsavable_soul]

Interesting piece,
I like the opener because in a way our breath does expire every day and it is what was done with the day that will determine if it stokes a fire that lives on. nice work.
Chris

[lovergirl]

well said (y) truly we have to live our lives and not waste any minute of them ;) wonderful words and a beautiful piece love it ;)

[Linda alexander]

Great and thought provoking write, so true , enjoyed

[MagicAl]

Thought provoking and very inspirational write.. :)

[Calibaster]

Wow. This is so true. I'd take the advice now, but I think I'll wait for summer! ;) Great job!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Very true .Live your life to the fullest but in a way that the legacy you leave behind will be a proud one :)

[Rachelle]

A challenge to all who live only for the worldly and the temporal!

[Leslie Philibert]

Wisdom packed in a good poem..