2:15

Life is anything but stable.

         One day you're at the top then you're struggling in a new different way. It's just up to our character and soul to make some type consistency in this dirt, so consistent that when any challenge passes through us either expected, unexpected, sideways, Fridays, that it won't matter, we'll get through it.

                         The only body we have to live in is ourselves. 

                                       

                                      Your body is a building. You're the super; you make space for whoever you want in your life. If they pay their rent on a reasonable time, they get closer to you and you trust them. There will always be problems in your building. Either is door problems, sink problems, and cable problems, they will always come. 

                                            

 

Having a perfect building in our lives is impossible

 

Is up to us,

to handle the

problems

or let 'em handle us

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Now welcome to the CRZ building.
Every new person he meets is in
 his lobby.
Right now, you’re in his lobby.
Only those who are free spirited
attain a room and how long you keep
hmm,
all depends on you, my friend.
 

CRZ

 

Welcome, let me show you
what’s happening in habitat right now.
My pop’s room is stable,
a little messy
couple arguments lying around the dresser.
My mom’s room is vacant
like a alcoholic’s bottle after a Friday night
just memories imbuing the empty cubicle.  
My cable is working; I view the world
in HD, Hardly Distant.
My girl, she got the sweet room,
is suite to see her smile permeate the shades
she battles the sun sometimes
to see which one is brighter.
And my room... well hey; you have to
live here first to see mine.

 

How is your building looking like?
Are you happy with its conditions?
Do the tenants appreciate your service?
Would you want a room in the CRZ residence???

Author's Note

This is continuation of my poem "8:16"

Reviews

[MagicAl]

Interesting, profound piece.

[Katseye]

Very interesting take on life. Like this peace a lot.

[Penny]

There is amazing word play you used in the poem and the concept is interesting too. Nice read.

[Michael G. Smith]

Interesting philosophies that I wholeheartedly agree with.

[Ravyne Hawke]

This is crazy all over the place and I absolutely love it! Love the idea of our bodies being a building.. such a wonderful metaphor! My fave lines:

My pop’s room is stable,
a little messy
couple arguments lying around the dresser.
My mom’s room is vacant
like a alcoholic’s bottle after a Friday night
just memories imbuing the empty cubicle.

Brilliant piece CRZ!

[kublakhan27]

Excellent work, you've worked the metaphors to perfection, and have offered a fresh way of looking at ourselves and those around us...well done CRZ.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

I like this style, it is different and interesting. It made me want to keep reading. Great use of metaphors. Well done!

[Centfie]

Very interesting write.Creative too especially...in the way you introduce and use the personal touch... It makes the poem conversational

[stars are far]

New style..its my first read for such a write..
good impression it left...well done

[prachi prangya agasti]

different and interesting definitely.... good one.....