2:15

Life is anything but stable.

         One day you're at the top then you're struggling in a new different way. It's just up to our character and soul to make some type consistency in this dirt, so consistent that when any challenge passes through us either expected, unexpected, sideways, Fridays, that it won't matter, we'll get through it.

                         The only body we have to live in is ourselves. 

                                       

                                      Your body is a building. You're the super; you make space for whoever you want in your life. If they pay their rent on a reasonable time, they get closer to you and you trust them. There will always be problems in your building. Either is door problems, sink problems, and cable problems, they will always come. 

                                            

 

Having a perfect building in our lives is impossible

 

Is up to us,

to handle the

problems

or let 'em handle us

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Now welcome to the CRZ building.
Every new person he meets is in
 his lobby.
Right now, you’re in his lobby.
Only those who are free spirited
attain a room and how long you keep
hmm,
all depends on you, my friend.
 

CRZ

 

Welcome, let me show you
what’s happening in habitat right now.
My pop’s room is stable,
a little messy
couple arguments lying around the dresser.
My mom’s room is vacant
like a alcoholic’s bottle after a Friday night
just memories imbuing the empty cubicle.  
My cable is working; I view the world
in HD, Hardly Distant.
My girl, she got the sweet room,
is suite to see her smile permeate the shades
she battles the sun sometimes
to see which one is brighter.
And my room... well hey; you have to
live here first to see mine.

 

How is your building looking like?
Are you happy with its conditions?
Do the tenants appreciate your service?
Would you want a room in the CRZ residence???

Author's Note

This is continuation of my poem "8:16"

Reviews

[ragingwinds]

your writing style is unique .I really liked the fresh perspective you gave on life :)

[bookworm0812]

I really like the way that you connected life to a building. It's an image that everyone can relate to, and make personal. Everything in this was something that could be related to very quickly, and it is an emotional connection from the writer into the world of their inner lives. We do have an option to choose what we want and who we think is worthy of being in our lives. Those who are not worthy will be sent out to the street and be evicted. Life is a hotel. And nothing is a permanent arrangement for anyone unless they can prove they belong there, and can be beneficial. Sometimes we have to find the people who are able to fix the sink problems, and make the cable work, and make the world better.

[TL Boehm]

a wonderful poem. I suppose I have a lot of empty rooms, wasted space and squatters.

[Mark]

Hey CRZ, I like the way you write, wishing I had the musicians voice

My buildings old, run down, covered in ash
I have a couple of tenants, though never in sight
Yes I’d like a room but don’t have much cash
But then all I truly need, is a desk with a light

see you in the lobby

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

Your diction, simple and straight to the point. Well done

[Babe Roxx]

I love the analogy used in a descriptive and imaginative way in your write...it excites and inspires my own work deriving innovative energy from writes like this...depicts real life as we know it, as well, in its correlation. Nicely done.

[Cassie]

I am glad to be in your lobby that you sent this although am reading this months after you sent. I enjoyed reading

[Jorj Jie]

So Interesting ♥ thanks for sharing

[MissMellemonroe]

your room seems magical, beautiful, and full of love and your command.
i like it, some people needs a room like that to get to know themselves more.

[sharonlee]

Hello there... interesting collection of thoughts... told in an amusing tone that doesn't take away from the profoundness of its content.

I'm rather fond of my room... wide window where crystals dance in sunlight... a view of untidy trees which almost hide the road beyond... it is my create space... but I'd be happy to stop by your place for a visit, specially if you return the favor.