I am

She stands there. Thinking , wishing , hoping. Now she knows.

 

The man stands in front of her. A robust cunning smile towards her.

 

She, strong as a lion chewing its prey, her heart pounding, voice quivering. Shouts!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"I am the one"

Reviews

[Malark]

Three lines of power, one line of execution. Well done.

[lovergirl]

wow !! so deep , short yet meaningful i loved it and i hope i find my own "the one " lol ;)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Powerful!
Great write!
I liked it!
:)

[Leslie Philibert]

A poem of Japanese brevity, enigmatic, a thought provoker...

[Morgan Storms]

The second line almost made me thing she was being attacked in a bad way, of course then I read the rest and thought it was fantastic. So much said in such little words.

[topsyturvy]

Hmmm, interesting. For me it was thought provoking. A mixture of emotions even. :)

[Ruth]

What a blinding affirmation...a hunt become and acknowledged, superb! x

[h d e rushin]

How brave, how powerful is it to admit that "you have found me"? It transcends the bounds of
mamalian strength. Its the woking force that distinguishes all living species, human vulnerability.
Tremendous work my friend.

dana

[Dayran]

An encounter ... face to face ... is always exciting. I saw a picture of some antelope standing on one side of a watering hole ... while a pride of lions sat on the opposite ... just twenty feet away. It was eyeball to eyeball with death ... with a muddy sink of pond in between. Sometimes twenty feet can be miles apart. Nice.