I am

She stands there. Thinking , wishing , hoping. Now she knows.

 

The man stands in front of her. A robust cunning smile towards her.

 

She, strong as a lion chewing its prey, her heart pounding, voice quivering. Shouts!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"I am the one"

Reviews

[Rene Velez]

reads more like a scene in a story but whatever it's still good, well done.

[Tionge Rosalie Johnson]

"she, strong as a lion chewing its prey" great use of a simile there! Had to read over it twice because it caught my eye. There was great imagery there! Shows the power of lust and love very well!

[Stoop Kid]

So eloquent with a simplicity that illustrates the alluringly feral atmosphere so well.

"I am the one" being separated from it all really put such a bold emphasis on that statement, I felt the heat of those words on the back of my neck. Pure magic, CRZ.

[norman hale]

nicely done
can't wait to see more

[Valeigh Starr]

Wow! I love how this reads. The contradictory descriptions are so true.

[David Burke]

This is pretty cool and very powerful

[Farrsight]

Wow! It made me think. I like that!

[Jay Steitler]

Adrenaline-inducing! Wonderfully simple, and as compact as any Haiku! Love it!

[Calibaster]

This is very well written. I love the imagery! You did a fantastic job! ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You have packed quite a punch in your few lines.