I am

She stands there. Thinking , wishing , hoping. Now she knows.

 

The man stands in front of her. A robust cunning smile towards her.

 

She, strong as a lion chewing its prey, her heart pounding, voice quivering. Shouts!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"I am the one"

Reviews

[Hsnx]

wow i expected something else ...and it turned something else...its amazing...and simple..no more words no less words..just perfect..the way it is

[Perkele.7885]

She realizes her potential as an offensive and wary equal to the man with the cunning smile! Shouts
"Bring it on!'

[EloisaWrites]

With very simple words, with minimal efforts, you expressed a great deal in this write. I enjoyed it. :)

[Nia Hope]

no words just... *0* amazing as usual :)

[Hannah]

You created such contrast in so few lines and allowed the power of using minimal words to guide the reader in so many different directions. I love this poem's ambiguity and boldness, pure genius!

[Al R. Arce]

There is something to be said about theability of saying a lot with very little. You did it here! Well done!

[rutherford]

Intense with an ending of misdirection. This painted a dark scene at the beginning and now I'm contemplating the final line.

[Cryingkate]

Hmm above my head..........But I was here :-)

[Ally Monique]

hmmm this was interesting,
not at all what I expected when I clicked on the title ^^
I love how choppy this poem is, it adds intensity
wonderful job :)

[Blue]

Hmm, there's power in brevity. :) Well written, CRZ!