Okay, lets go.

a small tale told.

The walls of the mind, rigid as metal on a New York January neighboring space on earth with free tides of water beside it.

Oh what a human.

There's a tale of the boy who followed his heart. But the heart and human emotions wake up in different rooms. Human emotions doesn't pay the rent...it does only when happy and when the emotions sway towards recklessness, they pay for rent less than the balance. 

While all this jibber jabber is happening, the hearts room is upstairs and it's sleeping waiting to be used. In a way that everybody benefits. It taps its buddy, the mind and recommends strongly to loosen up and attempt something new, free & out of the comfort zone.

The heart doesn't elicit peer pressure

It's a dear blesser.

Then the mind chuckles, " You're hilariously scary, but I'll try anyways."

The heart smiles, holding all the human emotions in his grasp.

Looks at life ahead of him. Says his prayers, laces boots, steps out the door, inhales deep.

Exhales love saying "Okay, lets go"

Author's Note

This is the offspring of my previous poems :
Such a simple battle , yea , dEAR , Thought 2 , Did it? , soul session 1 and 2 , 8:16 , That one thing , People open minds , 6/14 , right now.

Reviews

[EloisaWrites]

This is very philosophic and very original. I love everything that you wrote, especially when you mention how the heart and human emotions rented different rooms. It is the battle of the self to regard all the important things as it is and to try to be at peace with ourselves. This is lovely. :)

[MsJewel]

Your creativity and talent shines in this well written piece. Very enjoyable read. Thanks for the RR.

:) Julie

[CRZ]

Thank you very much Ms.Jewel.
Loving your profile pic btw

[R. L. Hill]

Enjoyed this very much, but the layout of the lines made it a bit hard to read.

[CRZ]

Thank you :), fixed it now

[Dayran]

Its like a shot from a rifle ... nicely done. Love ... when it consumes all that we do ... leaves little room for other considerations. But I'm not sure that it doesn't pay the rent. Employers look for workers who get along with others ... who's a team player ... and brings some passion to the work. Its the character of the social nature out there.

[CRZ]

You're right. love effaces all the other negatives.
Thank you Dayran

[The dark story]

Whoa!! I must say this is something really very different i have read something so far and it is really remarkably enjoyable. I like the way you have penned it…the outlying differences between mind and heart and the control each one has.
I liked the ending. It always takes a courage to do something "NEW"…and it goes well if our heart lead us there.
Nicely penned.thanks for sharing.

[CRZ]

Thank you a lot ATIBA
let our hearts open the doors

[The dark story]

Always welcome:)

[Bob Sherunkle]

That was great.Got the feeling of internal struggle.Great write CRZ

[CRZ]

Got that right , Thanks Bob

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

interesting poem; great job :)

[CRZ]

Thank you Lucy :)

[Penny]

Really very imsginitive CRZ. Its a good work you have done with this poem.

[CRZ]

Appreciate your words, Penny

[Penny]

Ur welcum. I appreciate ur talent

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

This was so good! I really liked this one

[CRZ]

Thank you so much maggie
Enjoy the holidays

[❤ Maggie ❤]

You are most welcome. :) You too!

[Sasha]

Absolutely Interesting !
Loved it !

[CRZ]

Thank you Sasha
Happy holidays

[wordman]

this is the life long story about man
a constant battle and who wins

[CRZ]

Something we all have to spectate and find out
Happy holidays wordman

[wordman]

yeap that's why they call it life