Okay, lets go.

Okay, lets go.

A Poem by CRZ
"

a small tale told.

"
The walls of the mind, rigid as metal on a New York January neighboring space on earth with free tides of water beside it.
Oh what a human.

There's a tale of the boy who followed his heart. But the heart and human emotions wake up in different rooms. Human emotions doesn't pay the rent...it does only when happy and when the emotions sway towards recklessness, they pay for rent less than the balance. 

While all this jibber jabber is happening, the hearts room is upstairs and it's sleeping waiting to be used. In a way that everybody benefits. It taps its buddy, the mind and recommends strongly to loosen up and attempt something new, free & out of the comfort zone.


The heart doesn't elicit peer pressure
It's a dear blesser.



Then the mind chuckles, " You're hilariously scary, but I'll try anyways."


The heart smiles, holding all the human emotions in his grasp.
Looks at life ahead of him. Says his prayers, laces boots, steps out the door, inhales deep.


Exhales love saying "Okay, lets go"

© 2013 CRZ


Author's Note

CRZ
This is the offspring of my previous poems :
Such a simple battle , yea , dEAR , Thought 2 , Did it? , soul session 1 and 2 , 8:16 , That one thing , People open minds , 6/14 , right now.

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This is very philosophic and very original. I love everything that you wrote, especially when you mention how the heart and human emotions rented different rooms. It is the battle of the self to regard all the important things as it is and to try to be at peace with ourselves. This is lovely. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Nicely written. I do like your style. How the heart and mind meet.


Posted 10 Years Ago


CRZ

10 Years Ago

Thank you, they're on the highway leading YOU
You have a very unique style love it and thank you for sharing. The line "The heart smiles, has to be my favorite, ties it together."

Posted 10 Years Ago


CRZ

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
Hopefully your heart smiles for yrs to come
Clever and witty illustration of interaction between heart and mind! Sweet piece!

Posted 10 Years Ago


CRZ

10 Years Ago

Thank you Jay, peace
Listen to your heart and just go for it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


CRZ

10 Years Ago

You got it Jasmine.
This definitely offers insight on how risky and scary manifesting one's feelings and pursuing romance can be. 'm trying to figure out whether the color choice is supposed to mean anything?

Posted 10 Years Ago


CRZ

10 Years Ago

I actually wasn't thinking about romance but it does apply, nice connection.
The color choice .. read more
Nice concept for a poem, nice art. Great write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


CRZ

10 Years Ago

Appreciate it Daniel
Wow! Dynamic philosophy. Keep up the great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


CRZ

10 Years Ago

Thank you Gleb
Gleb Zavlanov

10 Years Ago

It was my pleasure.
cleverly written, like the use of fonts and color...

Posted 10 Years Ago


CRZ

10 Years Ago

Thank you Leslie
The brain may be pragmatic but the heart is the joie de vivre !

An interesting, imaginative piece of literature, splendid !

Posted 10 Years Ago


CRZ

10 Years Ago

Yess, the enjoyment of life!
Thank you Tom
A cadre of words, meaning, thought and prevalence, well done, great read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


CRZ

10 Years Ago

Thank you Thomas, you're an observer for all aspects of writing.

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