Okay, lets go.

a small tale told.

The walls of the mind, rigid as metal on a New York January neighboring space on earth with free tides of water beside it.

Oh what a human.

There's a tale of the boy who followed his heart. But the heart and human emotions wake up in different rooms. Human emotions doesn't pay the rent...it does only when happy and when the emotions sway towards recklessness, they pay for rent less than the balance. 

While all this jibber jabber is happening, the hearts room is upstairs and it's sleeping waiting to be used. In a way that everybody benefits. It taps its buddy, the mind and recommends strongly to loosen up and attempt something new, free & out of the comfort zone.

The heart doesn't elicit peer pressure

It's a dear blesser.

Then the mind chuckles, " You're hilariously scary, but I'll try anyways."

The heart smiles, holding all the human emotions in his grasp.

Looks at life ahead of him. Says his prayers, laces boots, steps out the door, inhales deep.

Exhales love saying "Okay, lets go"

Author's Note

This is the offspring of my previous poems :
Such a simple battle , yea , dEAR , Thought 2 , Did it? , soul session 1 and 2 , 8:16 , That one thing , People open minds , 6/14 , right now.

Reviews

[EloisaWrites]

This is very philosophic and very original. I love everything that you wrote, especially when you mention how the heart and human emotions rented different rooms. It is the battle of the self to regard all the important things as it is and to try to be at peace with ourselves. This is lovely. :)

[Kt k]

I love the ending "says his prays lace up his boots steps out the door .......okay let's go".
I can hold much of this peole true to life great use of personification along with other techniques

[CRZ]

Thank you Kt k , happy new year!

[Tionge Rosalie Johnson]

I love the abstract elements of the poem. You already captured my attention by the introductory simile with the mind being as rigid as metal. The personification of the heart having a room upstairs waiting for the mind to join it really grasps what you were trying to say in a very unique original way. This is probably just because I couldn't figure out what the colors were used for, but I might take the colors out of the font because they were a little bit of a distraction. But, that was the only little thing I had, because overall your poem had me thinking and I really enjoy reading poetry that doesn't always state the entire meaning. This is an excellent piece :).

[CRZ]

Thank you very much Rosalie.
The colors of font is just out there to be different than the rest of the font. When you follow you're dream, you will always look out of whack or seem different. Try something both in this poem and in everyday life.
Thank you again, Happy New Year

[Tionge Rosalie Johnson]

Happy New Year to you as well and that is such a cool concept with the colors :). Keep writing because you definitely have the talent :). I can't wait to read more :).

[CRZ]

Thank you, I have tons on this website. You can enjoy my imagination :]

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Great share... love how you started it out... let's go!

[gombeggar]

yer exploration of yer talent here is very good and growing...try to focus on the words and forget about the colors and bold print...be mindful of wut yer saying both 2 yerself and 2 yer audience

[Emerald Seas]

When the heart is involved - that is where we find happiness, fulfillment, contentment. Lovely thoughts within this writing! Well done.

[CRZ]

You got that right!!
Thank you

[Frieda P]

If we lead with our heart, yes. I like that the heart took a chance here. Inhale, exhale deep, nice imagery.

[CRZ]

Thank you Frieda.
Good to just breathe in this life

[Frieda P]

I concur. Happy New Year..................

[CRZ]

Happy new year also

[Rose of many colours]

GREAT write This piece is dynamic.Whenever I read your stuff I hear a mixture of reggae and dub

[CRZ]

Thank you very much Rose.
haha it sure does have that type of rhythm

[Patrick O'Neil]

I like it, the theme is positive and in a way inspirational for the new year ahead. Well done.

[CRZ]

Thank you, maybe someone can use this as a guide for 2014!

[Patrick O'Neil]

That truly hope so, great write.

[Lucifer Jones]

This was simply incredible. Such a power to it and the subject matter... Letting logic take a back seat to the heart in pursuit of life... A struggle for many every day... So very nicely and powerfully voiced my friend.

[CRZ]

Thank you & you have a great point!