KOM

KOM

A Poem by CRZ
"

Thoughts that occur in a blur

"

Airplanes and Time ...

What do they have in common?

                                  They both take you places but you never know for sure what to expect 

                                    You know there's a future ... you know wheres the location

But it's ... never certain.

 

 

            These two things are just humans medium to

navigate in life.

 

Either we live bad or right.

Move in the morning , some prefer night.

 

And our inner self is the engine of this plane

And we have inner help, it's just not mentioned through our pain. 

 

AND the craziest thing of all, is that ... IT KEEPS ON MOVING 

 

Stop after stop .. IT KEEPS ON MOVING 

Fear stands as the biggest block .. IT KEEPS ON MOVING 

 

The planes airline is called Tic Toc and. 

 

IT KEEPS ON MOVING 

 

© 2013 CRZ


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Intelligent concept. I enjoyed this. Nice flow. I can almost hear it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ha! Except that the ride does eventually end...
But the airplane still keeps on moving....
Tic Toc!
Brilliant!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm happy to read this amazing poem...fun+logic(ok somewhat)+a lively view toward things.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Loved the line "Our inner self is the engine of this plane'. It was a really deep poem. Only one small thing: Some older dudes like me found the font size a bit small. I'd suggest a larger font size. Other than that, it was very insightful and deep. Good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Loved this high-concept write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Either we live bad or right.

Move in the morning , some prefer night.

yeah you have to choose your own way !

Posted 11 Years Ago



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CRZ
CRZ

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