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Thoughts that occur in a blur

Airplanes and Time ...

What do they have in common?

                                  They both take you places but you never know for sure what to expect 

                                    You know there's a future ... you know wheres the location

But it's ... never certain.

 

 

            These two things are just humans medium to

navigate in life.

 

Either we live bad or right.

Move in the morning , some prefer night.

 

And our inner self is the engine of this plane

And we have inner help, it's just not mentioned through our pain. 

 

AND the craziest thing of all, is that ... IT KEEPS ON MOVING 

 

Stop after stop .. IT KEEPS ON MOVING 

Fear stands as the biggest block .. IT KEEPS ON MOVING 

 

The planes airline is called Tic Toc and. 

 

IT KEEPS ON MOVING 

 

Reviews

[Daffy]

This is good. I get the message, the message is good as well as the 'metre'. Easy read and a worthwhile read. Thanks for sharing.

[Chris]

I appreciate this one. The definable logic and the rhythm you give it kept me here.

[Dean]

Interesting concept. I'm off to read more.

[Dominic Shaya]

sublime punchlines in there dude,real...artsy,nice work

[carol burgess romance]

You portrayed time so well in this I could feel the movement...like the format

[Diana]

Time crops up. A tricky beast...never stopping no matter what, as you say, "it keeps on moving."

[Douglas White]

I think every writer eventually has to take a whack at describing time. This was a particularly good effort, in my opinion. An excellent intersection of two seemingly very different ideas, shown in a different light. Very well done.

[Dayran]

Time and tide waits for no man.

[Cassie]

This is such a lovely write. I loved it

[unsavable_soul]

Nice write,
Your concept is unique and is an interesting approach to the idea of time. A few places were a bit disconnecting for me due to a come and go flow or rhyme pattern. I like the idea laid out here as time and an airplane being relatively one in the same. Nice job.
Chris
90/100