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Thoughts that occur in a blur

Airplanes and Time ...

What do they have in common?

                                  They both take you places but you never know for sure what to expect 

                                    You know there's a future ... you know wheres the location

But it's ... never certain.

 

 

            These two things are just humans medium to

navigate in life.

 

Either we live bad or right.

Move in the morning , some prefer night.

 

And our inner self is the engine of this plane

And we have inner help, it's just not mentioned through our pain. 

 

AND the craziest thing of all, is that ... IT KEEPS ON MOVING 

 

Stop after stop .. IT KEEPS ON MOVING 

Fear stands as the biggest block .. IT KEEPS ON MOVING 

 

The planes airline is called Tic Toc and. 

 

IT KEEPS ON MOVING 

 

Reviews

[Sadie Maisonet]

The hook was grabbing, splendid!

[Calibaster]

That was ... awesome!!! I loved it so much, especially the comparison that hooked me in the first place. Great Job! ;)

[MandaBear]

I like this one. Very unique

[Rose of many colours]

Very entertaining and a lesson to learn, i like the description..

[FlatLineBeauty]

Very true and an interesting comparison. I liked this. xo Winter

[Jack...]

Indeed and it seems to be moving so much faster these days.

[smurfett]

I feel the world speeding up not caring what we need out of it. This depicts the perfect way life is lived these days. Thank for sharing!!

[Sarai Lee]

I like how the poem creates that perpetual image of planes flying in and out of a terminal, day and night, on and on. Good job on that image! It's a good way to compare the perpetual motion of time, too. Thanks for sharing!

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

I really like the idea. Although I do not agree with some lines but I like the message put through specially in the lines "And our inner self is the engine of this plane
And we have inner help, it's just not mentioned through our pain." Thanks for the RR!

[Sanober]

You've drawn an interesting analogy between time and airplanes.
Very unique, and well executed idea. Good job!