KOM

Thoughts that occur in a blur

Airplanes and Time ...

What do they have in common?

                                  They both take you places but you never know for sure what to expect 

                                    You know there's a future ... you know wheres the location

But it's ... never certain.

 

 

            These two things are just humans medium to

navigate in life.

 

Either we live bad or right.

Move in the morning , some prefer night.

 

And our inner self is the engine of this plane

And we have inner help, it's just not mentioned through our pain. 

 

AND the craziest thing of all, is that ... IT KEEPS ON MOVING 

 

Stop after stop .. IT KEEPS ON MOVING 

Fear stands as the biggest block .. IT KEEPS ON MOVING 

 

The planes airline is called Tic Toc and. 

 

IT KEEPS ON MOVING 

 

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

I'm getting a read as time is the element that keeps on moving! No matter when we decide to move either our inner self or our body itself; time keeps on moving. What ever we may encounter, fear, distress, or a lap dance on company time, time keeps on....what? MOVING!

[TL Boehm]

Either we live bad or right. True words.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Love the metaphor comparing life to airplanes...great write...

[Eddie Phillips]

Loved this poem. its creative and positive.

[Tom C]

LOL being a pilot this is intriguing. Thanks for sharing.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Different planes can exist in the world at varying levels.

[Lyn Anderson]

I like the style, rhythm, and flow of this poem, great use of all the different elements to create the mood.

[David Burke]

This is very powerful and very well done great job kido

[Daniel Sala]

This is a very good poem, the metaphors work well. Tic Toc...

[MissMellemonroe]

beautiful!!!! but i shouldnt be surprised because YOU KEEP ON MOVING people with your poems.