dEAR.

dEAR....

  I'm not mad at you, I'm tired of you. You're like the old lady in the bus who's always complaining with a eagle face. You are controlling this world, holding people still. You're not even real, that's the crazy part and I'm aware. You were the reason why I didn't ask that girl out in the 6th grade. You were the reason why I didn't pick up the pen earlier. Now you are the why I just don't give a damn anymore. Can't hold me in the shackles you have 97% of the population in. I've always been the type to do my own thing. Now I am my own thing. I think of you; flashbacks of tears and woes and lows that have yet to come.

I mean I can't make this world do a 180 turn.

So do you , have a ball cause YOU in my life.... na not at all.

sincerely, F*****g Evasive Annoying Rat 

Author's Note

Open your eyes, my friend.

Reviews

[Diana]

Could be so many things, but fear is at the heart of this issue. So easy to let it take over, yet so wrong.

[Pyyro]

Nice turn of events. Quite the twist at the end. But even so, it brings us back to the almighty fear that consumes many a person. Nicely done

[iliOZ]

i find regrets and resolutions as two main elements to keep us distinctively separate from animals. i mean probably we are the only creatures who know what mortality is while hoping for immortality, so we can repeat our own stupid moves.
i am glad it is not really so and that for me you captured it so vividly.

[Sami Khalil]

This was a good poem...Thank you for sharing...:)............

[Frieda P]

Fear will keep us from moving forward and it's usually something in our own heads, nothing tangible that prevents us from doing so, good rant of a poem.

[Baban.A.A]

well written sayings, or truths. these were more like confessions of a heartbroken person who now allude to it as the right and peoper time to reveal what he had kept and swallowed for years, it is time to tell her that though I love you, I don't want you anymore, and you battered me with your love, so now it is time to say averderci and adieu. well done.

[Rose of many colours]

I was once young. Didn't like old ladies over me shoulder.I had some very agressive behaviour as a kid.It would have been to my destruction if I didn't took heed to their nagging warning admonishings which I hated like hell.But one thing I have learned from old people ..so to speak is that they have a wealth of knowledge,Out of the abundance of the heart the mouth speaketh. God can make the world do more than a 180 turn

[Avinash]

Welcome to the Club of freedom..and enormous opportunities. Good that you decided to break the vicious cycle.

[prachi prangya agasti]

really good... i appreciate it... keep up...!!