dEAR.

dEAR....

  I'm not mad at you, I'm tired of you. You're like the old lady in the bus who's always complaining with a eagle face. You are controlling this world, holding people still. You're not even real, that's the crazy part and I'm aware. You were the reason why I didn't ask that girl out in the 6th grade. You were the reason why I didn't pick up the pen earlier. Now you are the why I just don't give a damn anymore. Can't hold me in the shackles you have 97% of the population in. I've always been the type to do my own thing. Now I am my own thing. I think of you; flashbacks of tears and woes and lows that have yet to come.

I mean I can't make this world do a 180 turn.

So do you , have a ball cause YOU in my life.... na not at all.

sincerely, F*****g Evasive Annoying Rat 

Author's Note

Open your eyes, my friend.

Reviews

[Lucifer Jones]

Totally bad... a beautiful rampage!

[Brian Angeles]

Such strong passion of sorrow and emotions filling the air.

[Dayran]

Some expectations are impossible to meet ... but its nice just to keep to the relationship.

[Einstein Noodle]

buggering nasties can not keep us down ... fuckers.. :)
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[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

A brief literary piece with a very profound message. (with a hilarious treat at the end) :)

[sivan]

i like the style and the content and it's sort of universal in a sense cause' one can relate it to a person or an object or a god considering the anonymity of the "dear"

[wordman]

tell her off in a poem who would have thought of that message well done

[smurfett]

I'm not mad at you, I'm tired of you....love that line. Very nicely written. Nice when you can venture out on your own and be your own person...once again. That's my take on your words anyway...=) Thank you for writing!!

[ayosonolowo]

Nice poem bro, which have a great message in it, and i think you've really done it well.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Freedom can be so liberating. You told 'her' in no uncertain terms. Nicely done!