dEAR.

dEAR....

  I'm not mad at you, I'm tired of you. You're like the old lady in the bus who's always complaining with a eagle face. You are controlling this world, holding people still. You're not even real, that's the crazy part and I'm aware. You were the reason why I didn't ask that girl out in the 6th grade. You were the reason why I didn't pick up the pen earlier. Now you are the why I just don't give a damn anymore. Can't hold me in the shackles you have 97% of the population in. I've always been the type to do my own thing. Now I am my own thing. I think of you; flashbacks of tears and woes and lows that have yet to come.

I mean I can't make this world do a 180 turn.

So do you , have a ball cause YOU in my life.... na not at all.

sincerely, F*****g Evasive Annoying Rat 

Author's Note

Open your eyes, my friend.

Reviews

[Sadie Maisonet]

The anger in this capturing, the feelings pouring out. Good piece dear. pun, pun.

[Justine]

Ouch! Strong emotions in these words, perhaps a bit of catharsis? I like the acrostic author note and agree that fear stops us from achieving our potential. Yeah the final line sums it up perfectly. Like what you did. Justine :)

[carol burgess romance]

some writes are for healing I hope this was one

[FlatLineBeauty]

This seemed to be very deeply thought out. Like you pulled yourself away from the situation and viewed it like a picture hanging on a wall. Sorry it took me awhile to review, but great job. xo Winter

[Douglas White]

Very interesting, because this could be applied to fear, doubt, self-consciousness, shyness, anger, and hate, among other things. I always like writing that isn't TOO specific, and allows people to pull their own meanings out of it. I read this as a letter to self-doubt, a letter that states once and for all that doubt must be cast aside. A good read that will give you pause to think, no matter how you see it.

[redflutterby]

Fear is all consuming...its eats us from the inside out. When we conquer it..we are truly free. Excellent write...resounds for most of us!

[dw817]

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Not - sure what to make of this. Is it about love ?

[CRZ]

It's a letter to fear, my friend. Read it over, see if you make something now

[dw817]

The only other thing I can think of this is a story about an imaginary friend that is not good for you. The best way to prove this is to ask them some questions. If their answers seem a bit off then it's someone in your head, and we've all been there.

[MissMellemonroe]

I like "now im doing my own thing. i think of you;flashbacks of tears and woes and lows that have yet to come.'' that whole line inspired me!!!!!!

[Mike Emil]

eagle face
like the image
you are welcome to shout on kohlrabi theater
HAI!!!

[00000000000000000000000..]

Deep write there! Sounds like a be-little moment like someone south as family stopping all from taking place. Its hard but we have to just say enough and do our own thing, right or wrong its a part of learning.