dEAR.

dEAR....

  I'm not mad at you, I'm tired of you. You're like the old lady in the bus who's always complaining with a eagle face. You are controlling this world, holding people still. You're not even real, that's the crazy part and I'm aware. You were the reason why I didn't ask that girl out in the 6th grade. You were the reason why I didn't pick up the pen earlier. Now you are the why I just don't give a damn anymore. Can't hold me in the shackles you have 97% of the population in. I've always been the type to do my own thing. Now I am my own thing. I think of you; flashbacks of tears and woes and lows that have yet to come.

I mean I can't make this world do a 180 turn.

So do you , have a ball cause YOU in my life.... na not at all.

sincerely, F*****g Evasive Annoying Rat 

Author's Note

Open your eyes, my friend.

Reviews

[Eddie Phillips]

Wow! Deep feelings and expressed freedom. I liked it.

[TL Boehm]

Amen. Dismiss the fear. Well penned.

[MichaelsLyric.com]

It's interesting how we can influence each other, to the point where one forgets themselves. Freedom... I felt it in this piece. And it was a pleasure to read. Thank you.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well way to stand up for yourself.A wonderful declaration of independence.I like:)

[外人 (Gaiji..]

nice letter, easy to relate with :)

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

A good write about your subject, but I would have titled it--Fear.
Overcoming this nagging thing in the back of your mind takes courage and when you do it is rewarding.

[Daniel Sala]

Hear, hear. What a succinct manner of saying NO, not in my life. Great read.

[rutherford]

I like the phrase "eagle face" Powerful

[Nia Hope]

Absolutely love this!! Amazing write :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Certainly quite a bit of unresolved anger in this write. Your feelings are quite clear. The question is, will she read this and understand? For your sake, I hope so. Lydi**

[CRZ]

Lydia, this is a letter to fear