Thought 2

The world is passing me by.

Society is just aging me and all the fears are just burning me

But

 .........If I stay young in my heart, I'll be fresh for an eternity 

Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

that's the spirit. Soul should remain above all the traps.

[MsJewel]

I agree. We need to stay young at heart!
:) Julie

[h d e rushin]

Poetry extends a persons life by, at least, another 20 years. I should have long gone of nervous
excitement in 1993, lol. I love this poem....

dana

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the ending. I hope it is true. We need to stay young at heart. Make each day worthwhile. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

That age old adage young at heart' really does have something to it, so does your poem. Well said.

[ThoughtsofShyann]

I loved this it was so simple but its meaning was so complex ans it was so real. This was really really good like I am mind blown how this phrase could literally have such a powerful effect thank you I think I really needed to hear this!

[Heather]

beautifully put as long as on the inside you are young nobody can tell you any different, great job!! :D

[Sue]

Short but sweet but such a true statement - good one CRZ :)