Thought 2

The world is passing me by.

Society is just aging me and all the fears are just burning me

But

 .........If I stay young in my heart, I'll be fresh for an eternity 

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

Staying young at heart is the secret to life...I think! ; )

[Tarry Franck]

So few words but very well said. Wonderful!!!

[BL]

Very true with so few words

[Dayran]

A truer thought has never been expressed. Great job.

[Einstein Noodle]

great stuff CRZ, so few words and the turn of your last line hits like a brick to the center...
E.

[Rose of many colours]

Haha, You hit the nail on the head where society is concerned.. but the last decision you made here is wise... good piece.

[gabrielle]

True that. Our society could be draining but keeping that positivism or feeling young at heart could help us through..

[wordman]

great poem Jason,good news it gets worse lol
Ron

[Angel]

To stay young at heart...I think it is the most important thing that there is!!
I believe you have nailed it, Jason!