Pieces of

Stand in the mirror, couldn't see things more clearer

that all the answers are there but if I don't know which questions to ask

What does the answer even mean to me

Does it mean, I go soul searching so alone or with a herd to eventually fly off like some birds.

Do I need religion to access God

Can God even be accessed?

You mean to tell me that I need to give funds and be confined to a building to worship my maker

please, wake up. He's everywhere like the pigs quote on quote patrolling 

I'm just rolling with ideas 

Ideas soon to turn into actions and if you can't sleep at night with satisfaction

well you ain't doing enough.

I'm the youngest, being talked to by strangers and relatives. I won't be the dumbest.

I summon my permanent residence on this earth as CRZ. 

Shine like the bloodiest diamond from Sierra Leone Stevie Wonder can see. 

Wonder, How will the world be in the future.

Second thought, f**k the world. 

It's already messed up

All that is lefted is its people

I can only start with the guy standing on the reflection

These words come from a section from a man becoming a Man.

I"m on my way to my destiny where ever that may be.

It's on a journey to discover CRZ 

  

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

yes...so many pieces that seem unrelated. i think this is an honest and heartfelt write...you are facing your apprehensions and confusion rather than masquerading or escaping. i think that is half the battle of self discovering...i think religion is our attempts to access God....the surprise is that while we knock knock knock....this magnificent, loving, forgiving Creator is all the while right behind us...waiting for us to hear the whispers....of course one doesn't need a building to worship...nor to contribute to its maintenance....practicing selflessness whether to building funds or the Red Cross is something we do to enrich our own soul...these are the thoughts your poem have provoked from me...its 5 am and already i am thinking about God...and the beauty of youth ...hang in young man!
E.

[Perkele.7885]

Self awareness, a trip of discovery, becoming a man. The usual rites of passage, sometimes hard to stay on the paths that you have chosen for yourself! Keep writing as you have things to say! Spend some time though on your phrasing and punctuation!

[Everett DeValle]

Really deep provoking thoughts CRZ...I love your flow...very street...hip hop in it's essence...I Love it.

[ANTO]

Cool. Great linkage. Avante-garde CRZ

[Great Aunt Astri]

Flowing thoughts and eternal questions! You have enough material there to write many more poems. Get busy! I look forward to more.

[GIUSEPPE]

Very insightful write! I particularly like the line "all the answers are there but if I don't know which questions to ask" as Socrates is a favorite philosopher of mine. The line reminds me of the Socratic Method as Socrates was all about asking the right question.
GIUSEPPE

[Luke L]

I like the flow of this, but I think it would be better if you write with one central idea per piece, rather than just kind of freestyling

[Calibaster]

This is really good, I agree!

[smilempsn]

Nicely penned the 'Pieces of'... life...feelings...emotions..

'Wonder, How will the world be in the future.
Second thought, f**k the world.
It's already messed up
All that is lefted is its people'

Well yesh It is messed up... But we need to untangle it, and make a better place to live in :)

[Destiny Nicole]

Your really good. How old are you any way? lol. Your picture looks really young. To be so young and talented is a gift. most people would be intimidated by youngsters wit talent. I really like this one tho. keep it up.

~Destiny~

[CRZ]

Thank you very much, I turned 18 a month ago.

[Destiny Nicole]

well happy belated. and keep writing. I like your work. You'll see me around commenting on your work. Send me read request too. I'm impressed. Especially for you to be so young