Did it?

                                                           In Life,  YOU get to see how everybody acts                                                                                                                                                       and that makes YOU think but YOU can't see how YOU act. 

                                                                       

                                                                       Therefore  many don't think.

                                                                       And YOU are the most important person in YOUR life.

                                                                   This made me think, did it make YOU?

Reviews

[Astro]

Interesting use of language to inspire thoughts in the reader by the repetitiveness of the word you to enforce that it applies to everyone. Good write. For editing purposes, there should be an 's' at the end of of the word "act" in the first line.

[Dye]

Clever little poem. Made me think :)

[despitegreathands]

wait...what? lol So I watch people but I forget that people watch me but I don't think about the things I do? Right? ugh...brain hurts.

[wordman]

yeah I get it you,you,you tricky write

[lee von cleef]

Empathy I scream EMPATHY
For Me.

[Hypnos]

If more people put more thought into their actions then maybe we wouldn't be in the mess we're in now. Great job on the poem and I hope to see more.

[Angel]

If only more people would learn to think...
Nice work Jason!

[Tom]

In life...Look after number uno ! As no one else will !

[Sam]

Very nice. Great question to end with.

[Brian Angeles]

Yes it did. Good work. Keep up the good work