Did it?

                                                           In Life,  YOU get to see how everybody acts                                                                                                                                                       and that makes YOU think but YOU can't see how YOU act. 

                                                                       

                                                                       Therefore  many don't think.

                                                                       And YOU are the most important person in YOUR life.

                                                                   This made me think, did it make YOU?

Reviews

[Rosaria_V]

I love how the title of the poem is called "Did it" and how YOU is emphasized in the poem :)

[Calibaster]

In the first line, it should be acts not act. Other than that, yes, it did make me think a lot! Great job!

[Aarea]

Yes it did. Great writing!

[Eddie Phillips]

Great point in this composition.

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

Yes, actually did make me think. After all, EVERYONE has their front and their true selves. The latter, only one's closest friends can see a hint of, but nobody knows any given individual any better than that individual. This also makes me think of how quick people are to judge others because of their acts.

[karina y]

I like it. Whoot. Good Job hun.

[ThoughtsofShyann]

So powerful I really like it great job!

[SteveB]

Reminds me of the Robert Burns line - had we the grace to see ourselves as others see us. A thoughtful little piece. Thank you.

[The Lost Poetry Files]

Very profound that goes deep with its words and message :)

[Timothy Burjess]

As many have said, this piece is simplistic and straight to the point.

It's repetitive, but I believe that you intended to use this as a device, effective.

Good read.